Dil Hi Toh Hai 30th July 2018 Written Episode, Written Update on bepanahcolor.com
Ritvik and Rohit are walking in the jungle. Rohit blames himself for their plight. I shouldn’t have run away with Setu. Don’t know what will happen. Ritvik is worried for Palak. She was going to Mumbai. I was the one who brought her here.
Aman lets the car in which elders are sitting go in a different direction while he, Ananya and Reeva go in another. They are concerned for Ritvik and Rohit.
Ritvik thinks of his conversation with Palak (fighting on your own). She shares that she is worried for her parents. They have seen their son dying already. Don’t know how they will handle it if something happens to me. Flashback ends. Ritvik mentally vows to bring Palak back safely. Nothing will happen to you.
Dadi asks Saanchi if she has any update. Saanchi shares that Puri
Uncle has called the Commissioner for help. Dadi says Puri gets hyper always. What was the need?
Rohit suggests going back. We are wasting time. The more time we take the more problem it will be for Setu and Palak. Police will get to them asap.
Mahender Singh is not happy as neither of the boys have turned up. Setu shouts to them to take care of Palak. She needs medical help. Mahender Singh or his men aren’t concerned.
Ritvik asks Rohit if he wants to risk Setu’s life. Rohit says we still are nowhere. Ritvik says you can take this risk for Setu’s life but I cannot take this risk for Palak’s life. Rohit looks at him. Ritvik covers up saying he cannot take risk for their lives at all. He hears the sounds of frogs. It means the hideout is nearby.
Setu vows not to spare anyone if anything happen to Palak. She challenges the goons on being cowards. Mahender Singh slaps her. Who should I show my manliness to you? A goon takes her away while she begs to be freed.
Ritvik gets network in the small phone.
The goon leaves Setu in adjoining room. Palak is lying unconscious nearby and there are wounds around her face. Setu sits near her and encourages her to get up. I don’t know if you did the right thing or not. Flashback shows goon coming to kidnap Setu and Palak. They take the girls in their van. Palak requests thm to let go of them. Please tell us where you have brought us. Palak tells them to let Setu go. She isn’t rich. I am rich. The goons take both of them. Goons bring them to their hideout. Setu wonders where they are. Why did you do this? They will call at your home and ask for ransom. Palak says this is why I lied that I am rich. They turn and notice Mahender Singh there. He bangs her head on the iron pillar. Palak falls unconscious and starts bleeding. Mahender Singh asks his goon to call the guys. Flashback ends.
Ritvik calls Mahender Singh. He tells him to stay put. My men will come to get you. One girl is lying unconscious here already. I will do the same to other girl too. Ritvik asks him what he means. The networks disappear. He tells Rohit that the goon said there is only one girl safe. I wont take it if something happens to Palak. She should be safe. Rhit assures him she will be safe.
Palak gains conscious but is in pain. Setu asks her if she is fine. She inches closer to Palak somehow. Palak manages to pull her hands out of the rope. She next frees Setu.
Mahender Singh says it is in news that Deputy Police Commissioner is looking for the girls missing from jail. Mahender Singh is upset that the guys informed police.
Ritvik gets Mahender’s call. Mahender scolds him for calling police. Ritvik denies but Mahender Singh threatens to take very good care of Palak. Ritvik vows to give him anything he wants. We dint do anything like that. Mahender Singh tells him that he will get half girl now. One of the guys pick Setu and threaten to hurt her. Palak hits him on his head using a stick while Setu kicks the guy. Ritvik has heard some sounds on the phone and tells Rhit.
The girls ran out of a window. Mahender Singh thinks we wont get any money if the guys find out about this. I wont spare anyone.
Ritvik tries Mahender Singh’s phone again and again. He throws the phone in the well angrily. Rohit asks him what he did. Ritvik says I cannot think.
Setu and Palak are running in the jungle. The goons are chasing them. Palak suggests finding Rohit and Ritvik before the goons can catch them.
Rohit wants to reach the goons anyhow. The goons are coming there only. Why is your phone unreachable? Ritvik lies that the phone fell in the well. They take the boys with them.
Other part of the group is chasing the girls.
Reeva, Ananya and Aman are at the lodge. They are upset to know that all 4 of them left their luggage and car behind. They were staying in separate rooms (girls and boys respectively) but the boys look tensed.
Setu and Palak see a car. They think to take help from them but realise that they are the same goons. They duck as the goons fix the car. They drive away finally. Setu runs after the car seeing Rohit but Palak covers her mouth. We will be stuck badly. Setu suggests going to police but Palak denies. What if something happens to Ritvik by then? I wont! She covers up taking Rohit’s name too. we have to plan well.
Mamta is on call with Ananya. We are home. Are you hiding something? Ananya declines. I will call you back after speaking to Rohit. He is panicked.
Rohit and Ritvik reach Mahender’s den. He introduces himself to them and asks for money. Ritvik asks for the girls. Mahender Singh asks for money but Rohit suggests bringing the girls first. Setu and Palak are also outside the hideout by now. Palak asks Setu to go inside. They duck to avoid being seen.
Rohit asks Mahender Singh if he did something to the goons. Where is Setu? Where is Palak? Setu runs towards the hideout. Goons take her back inside. Palak is hiding behind the car. Rohit hugs Setu. Thank God you are fine. Ritvik asks for Palak. Mahender Singh says she ran away. Ritvik asks him what they did to Palak. Mahender Singh demands to take money. He aims the gun at Ritvik’s head. Ritvik keeps asking about Palak.
Monday, July 30, 2018
It Will Always Be Shrenal — Description And Prologue
in this story, shrenal are happily married with shrenu seven and a half months pregnant with their first child. after many difficulties, realization moments, both shrenu and kunal became shrenal.
however many say that happiness is always tested by god and in that case, their happiness also gets test by god.
an enemy in the past enters their life. why? because she is madly in love with kunal and hates shrenu with all her heart. even if she has to risk her self respect, she will do it only for kunal.
what will this enemy do?
kill shrenu all together?
get kunal hook or crook?
ruin shrenu’s life?
no one knows.
but will kunal let anything happen to shrenu?
will shrenal let anything happen to their unborn child?
just keep reading to find out.
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prologue:
kunal pinned shrenu to the wall. shrenu tried to escape but he wouldn’t let her.
shrenu: kunal, what is this?
kunal left trails of kisses on her neck and then whispered huskily: romance.
shrenu: shameless.
kunal: only for you.
he brushed his beard against her soft chubby cheeks making her squirm and giggle. he did it more vigorously only to see this childish behaviour of shrenu’s which was always a treat to see.
meanwhile:
someone was watching this from outside with a thought in her head: chi! these two are such a disgusting couple. I should be in shrenu’s place!! she ruined my life. she has so much trust in her husband. now let’s see when her husband breaks her trust!
1st Epi – Nazar 30th July 2018 Written Episode Update: Ansh Is Half Human And Half Witch
Nazar 30th July 2018 Written Episode, Written Update on bepanahcolor.com
Scene 1
A man at railway station of Bandap gets down from a train. He sees a girl sitting on station alone. He tries to go away but stops and asks what she is doing alone at night here? this place is not fine, I will drop you outside. Woman starts walking with her and asks what happens here? Man says people say that there is a witch that lives here, she has big nails, she eats people to remain young and have feet wrong side. Woman smirks and asks if they are like these? she shows her wrong side feet to him, he gets scared. Her nails and hair grow, she hits him her hair and smirks. Man is afraid and runs away from her.
Man is running away from the witch but witch climbs on tree and grabs his neck with her hair, she tie him to tree and laughs. He starts reciting hanuman chalisa, witch gets agitated
and close her ears. He tries to run from there but she grabs him with her long hair, she strangles him and takes away all his youth, man becomes a skeleton of old age. She smirks and leaves from there.
After sometime, a woman comes to her husband and says we have to do havan for Ansh fast, I am worried for him, we have to find a woman who have devi’s mark on her body and get her married to Ansh. Man says Ansh is not even 21. She says I am worried about Ansh, I am waiting for him. He says Ansh have a function in his college, he might get late. Man says where is my brother Avinash? Avi’s Chitali says he has got a case of some girl missing.
Avinash comes to a jungle with his police force. A witch is following them.
Priest says to Shekhar that we have to do aarti before good time passes. Shekhar says to his wife that lets do aarti. She lights diya, it falls down but Ansh comes there and holds diya in his hands. His mother says your hand can get burned. He says my mother shouldnt be hurt, he brings flowers for her and says I knew you wanted those, she asks him to do aarti with those.
In jungle, Avi’s dogs sees the witch and runs behind her.
Shekhar is doing pooja with family. They sing bhajan of Mahakali.
Witch goes up the tree. Dogs lose her. Avi looks around.
Ansh’s mother prays for Ansh’s safety to Devi.
Avi finds the deadbody on tree and is shocked. Officer says Preeti was a young girl then how her deadbody is old? Avi is stunned.
Ansh’s sister comes to Ansh and says Mohit and Risha had a fight, Mohit have challenged him for the race, you come out, she leaves. Ansh leaves too.
Ansh comes to racer. Mohit says to Ansh that you will lose today and you will shine our shoes. Ansh glares at them. He sits in his car. His brother asks him to not be angry, you know what happens to you when you get angry. Race starts.
Avi says to Ansh’s mom that a girl Preeti is from Ansh’s college, she was a young girl but her deadbody is old. Mom looks at photos and gets worried. She says I am worried about Ansh, we all know who can death like this. Avi says we cant say anything till report. Mother says I dont believe in all that. Kajal coughs, mom asks her to leave. Mom says we know what happens there because we have seen with our eyes. Shekhar says its an old things, 18 years passed so she will not return. His wife says that there can be another like her, the witch, you remember what she said when she died? Flashback shows witch getting burned but she said that they can kill her but cant finish her, she will return and she will keep an eye on them anywhere thet go, flashback ends. Suddenly a nail from wall falls down. Mom gets worried.
Mohit and Ansh are racing underground. Mohit’s car comes infront of Ansh.
Mom says that this nail was put on this wall by priest but why did it fall down? she says to Shekhar that priest said that Ansh’s bad time is going to start in 4 weeks, the way that girl died in jungle shows that witch has come and she will attract Ansh to her.
Ansh’s car strikes with the biker and loses balance. It hits the building glass wall and hangs on the building floor. Ansh is unconscious and injured.
Mom says to Shekhar that I still remember the day when they came in our lives. Flashback shows two orphaned kids coming to her, she hugged them, they accepted her and hugged her back. Flashback ends. Shekhar says to his wife Mehdeshwi that you loved them as a true mom, you didnt become a mother so they dont feel less loved. Mehdeshwi says I became their mom, they are more than kids for me. Shekhar says they my brother’s blood. Avi says they have Mritun’s blood but also blood of that woman who was a witch. Chitali says I have heard that witch’s first baby is half human and half witch.
Ansh is injured but he opens his eyes and his eyes are same like witch, he wipes his injuries easily.Saturday, July 28, 2018
It Will Always Be Shrenal — Description And Prologue
in this story, shrenal are happily married with shrenu seven and a half months pregnant with their first child. after many difficulties, realization moments, both shrenu and kunal became shrenal.
however many say that happiness is always tested by god and in that case, their happiness also gets test by god.
an enemy in the past enters their life. why? because she is madly in love with kunal and hates shrenu with all her heart. even if she has to risk her self respect, she will do it only for kunal.
what will this enemy do?
kill shrenu all together?
get kunal hook or crook?
ruin shrenu’s life?
no one knows.
but will kunal let anything happen to shrenu?
will shrenal let anything happen to their unborn child?
just keep reading to find out.
.
.
.
prologue:
kunal pinned shrenu to the wall. shrenu tried to escape but he wouldn’t let her.
shrenu: kunal, what is this?
kunal left trails of kisses on her neck and then whispered huskily: romance.
shrenu: shameless.
kunal: only for you.
he brushed his beard against her soft chubby cheeks making her squirm and giggle. he did it more vigorously only to see this childish behaviour of shrenu’s which was always a treat to see.
meanwhile:
someone was watching this from outside with a thought in her head: chi! these two are such a disgusting couple. I should be in shrenu’s place!! she ruined my life. she has so much trust in her husband. now let’s see when her husband breaks her trust!Adhura Alvida- Bepannah Si Mobbat Ki Hai-Episode 1
Zoya Siddiqui has over protective parents. Zoya seems to be the ideal entreprenur of Mumbai, India. Confident, brave and a caring boss. But she has a soft side too, a side which is filled with darkness, and sadness, with the past she tries to forget every time she closes her eyes.
All she sees with her eyes close is two coffee like eyes, that charming smile, those strong but gentle hands she found solace in and lastly, the voice.
the voice had a magical effect, touching the strings of her heart and increasing the space that Zoya had kept for that face, that heart, that…for…him..
But now she had to open her eyes, face the reality. Where was she? She was in Mumbai. However much she wished, she thought, she cried, no one understood her deepest feelings. Other than him. Or was that a lie too? Zoya felt she was surrounded with the wall of lies, not being able to forget the betrayals given by various people close to her, especially her Husband, with whom she thought she was in a perfect marriage with. Little did she know that he would ask for her heart and use a hammer to break it with the painful flames of the fire.
She was heartbroken, more than anybody, blaming herself, crying. No one understood her pain. No one sympathised with her. But one day those tears never came back. She became strong, but still soft at heart. Zoya Siddiqui was who she was today because of one person; Aditya Hooda, whom she shared an inexplicable bond with.
Aditya Hooda. His family was breaking apart, his marriage was breaking apart, he was breaking apart. But still, he seemed to be the strongest man in all the problems he faced. He didn’t bother to stop the ongoing divorce of his parents, he didn’t bother to stop the domestic violence his mother in law was facing by his Mother, he didn’t bother to understand his Wife. He was just so tired of thinking of all this. He didn’t have the power to do anything. To share anything. He was just a physical material, crumbling himself in the solace of his knees, regretting his life decisions, regretting his existence. He thought he had tried. But no one had tried for him. No one had understood what he really wanted. All they wanted was his happiness. For what? For, that was not his true happiness.
Zoya and Aditya were destined to meet.
Two heartbroken souls needed one another to mend their hearts. They were perfect for eachother. No one knew that. Aditya’s snobbish parents had no time for family, but only parties, social gatherings, for they had to uphold HarshVardhan Hooda’s apparent prestige. Aditya hid and locked himself in a room, blocked his ears, sat in one corner and cried for hours, and soon, suffered from severe sleep deprivation. Zoya too, an emotional wreck, lay straight on her bed, shivering, cold, from the aircon temperature she had put at 12 degrees. She wanted to freeze herself to death, she does not deserve to live, love and laugh. All that once existed in her life was now far far away, mostly dead.
The only thing which kept her skin alive was her late Husband’s memories, rolling into a ball of sadness, clinging onto the last mark of him.
On two opposite sides in the same city, two heartbroken souls dreaded their existence, and found that the calm rain would poach their excessive tears. There was only one way out from all this pain, freedom from all this tension, problems. And that was; Psychatrist Deanna Mathur. Their mutual Best Friend, but yet, Aditya and Zoya hadn’t. It was god’s plan to meet them when they needed eachother most. Probably, it was for love.
Filling up the small form the receptionist gave them, Aditya and Zoya sat next to eachother unknowingly, in nervous tears, playing with the sides of the paper, looking at two different sides. They were so close, yet so far. Zoya felt timid, but she knew this would be in her best interest. The receptionist unpleasantly shouted “Zoya Siddiqui”. Zoya panicked, assembled her things, stuffing her book inside, wiping her sweat, wearing her heels, and walks in a rush. Just as she is walking away, her duppata gets stuck in one of the chairs, as she struggles to untangle it. Aditya helps. “Relax, you’re going to see a psychiatrist after all” he said, in a depressed and sad tone. For Zoya, it was offensive. How could a stranger, possibly comment? Talk to her! She was so angry, so insecure. And then she realised, she was hurt, and she was venting her anger on the wrong person. It was best, if she just continued crumpling her duppata, nervously walking into the room. And so she did.
The room gave a sense of fear into Zoya. She slowly walked in, as Psychiatrist Mathur told her to take out a picture of the person she seems to be disturbed by, and share all her feelings of pain and anger. Happiness or excitement, which were obviously not prominent in her case. She dug through her bag, and she went through her bag, chose an object which seemed like a frame, and struggled to take it out. When she finally took it out, she realised it. It wasn’t her late Husband, Yash, but instead, some lady, young lady, with a beautiful blue saree,flowing like a Bollywood heroine, in a beautiful garden, which seemed self decorated. Her hair, jet black, straight, flying in sync with the wind. Deanna continued.. she is?
All Zoya could do was cry, shocked, picked up her things and ran out. It was embarrassment, or sadness? Zoya didn’t know herself. She then saw, Yash’s photo recklessly dangling from Aditya’s hand, while he nervously searched for Pooja’s photo. Zoya walked up to him, eyes bloodshot because of tears, bravely passed the photo to him and asked him for Yash’s photo by her eyes, which were now filled with anger, embarassment,and of course sadness.
(Hi guys!im back with a new ff with bepannah! I know I completely went missing for 2 years:) but I’m sure all the KRPKAB fans are now watching bepannah like me haha, well just to give a quick update of me for new readers and also my friends from 2 years ago, my name is Nishi Malhotra and I’m a 11 year old girl who lives in Singapore with her dad and her older sis:))
hope u enjoy my following episodes of this ff’:)thank u so much!:)oh btw, to avoid copyright infringement, I would like to mention that the thumbnail this FF has IS NOT mine but instead it belongs to diljot_grewal who happened to be part of my “explore posts” section on Instagram.Wednesday, July 25, 2018
Kasam 25th July 2018 Written Episode Update: Kritika Gets Proofs For Ranbir’s Innocence
Kasam 25th July 2018 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Kritika feeling sorry to Ranbir and asks moon to ask him to forgive her. She asks moon to ask him not to cry. Ranbir thinks of her. Akki comes there and tells him that Ishani left him knowing he is not his brother. Ranbir asks if he is feeling hurt. Akki says no. Ranbir tells that Ishani was not his true love. Ishani asks Kritika to leave her house and asks her to leave with her baggage. Kritika and Jiana asks what happened? Pummy comes there. Ishani tells her that she can’t share her love with anyone, not even with Jiana. She tells that you are loving her more than me now. She says I will bring so much money for you and then you will love me only. Pummy asks if she thinks she is greedy and tells that Kritika loved her and gave her respect which she never gave in her lifetime. Ishani
asks her to life. Kritika says I can’t go as I had promised my mum. Ishani takes Malini’s photo frame and throws on floor. It falls near Arun who has just come.
Arun says this house is of Kritika also. He apologizes to Pummy for lying and tells that Kritika is his elder daughter. He tells everything about his marriage with Malini and apologizes. Pummy forgives him and tells that she felt Kritika closer to her since she came. Arun says you have won my heart. Pummy says you had left your wife and daughter for me. She asks Kritika to call her Mamma and hugs her. Arun asks Kritika to call her Papa. Ishani says you have snatched my mother and now father. Kritika tells that Maa loves you a lot immensely and ignored Jiana. She gave you all the attention and wants to make you Ms. Universe and Ms. World. She is seeing her dream in your eyes and says you are her reflection. She cheers her. Ishani hugs her. Pummy asks Ishani to come to her. They have a family hug.
Kritika comes to the office. Malishka scolds Kritika and says the recording is not in it. She asks Vikas to fire her. Kritika tells Vikas that she wants to talk to him alone. Malishka asks her to talk there itself. Vikas goes to talk to Kritika. Kritika tells her that Malishka is lying and is trapping Ranbir. Malishka comes there and says they would have edited the video. Vikas says they will win the case anyways. He tells her that he knows about Malishka’s plan and tells that he fights fake cases and gets more money. He says I have sent LCD to your house. He tells her that whatever happened with Ranbir was his plan and asks her to come to court as hearing is at 3 pm. Kritika thinks she shall tell Ranbir everything. In the court, Malishka and Batra talk about getting Kapoor mansion after Ranbir loses the case. Kritika thinks so they did this to get the house. Jiana’s call comes on phone. Malishka says why your sister is calling on my phone. She checks and tells that it is your phone. Kritika takes the phone and comes out of phone. She finds the video in her phone and thinks to give to Ranbir somehow.
Precap:
Kritika comes to Ranbir’s house. Balraj and Mahima tell him that she is the girl whom they have chosen for him. Kritika and Ranbir get happy.The web series, much like a film or TV show, starts with a story idea.
I’ve decided to do a series of posts that will cover the entire span of making a web series. A lot of this advice will go a long way in helping you create an independent film as well, so, enjoy and hopefully it’s helpful!
Today’s topic: The Script.
The web series, much like a film or TV show, starts with a story idea.
THE STORY
The story idea has to be many things. It has to be interesting, it has to be sellable and it should be easily said in one sentence.
Interesting: Always ask yourself — okay, but why would someone watch that? Not would you personally watch it (though that’s important too) — but would others? Would your target audience like it (again, think of the target audience as someone other than you)?
For example: a story idea about a guy who’s in love with a girl and then he like, can’t get her, so then he like, sends her letters and tries and then stuff happens. Okay. But why do we care? Because (this is a freebie, you can all take this one), the girl is an alien and holds inside her the key to the universe (her ovaries). See? Easy. I also find that adding minorities helps.
Sellable: Internet video is like a wildly disorganized pile of 3rd grade arts and crafts projects. Somewhere in the stack, a few creepy genius kids have created brilliance — but you’ve really got to sort through the other work. And there’s a lot of other work. And it’s just so, so bad. How do you make yours stand out? Look at what you’re trying to do and find professional high-caliber shows. What do they do? How do they stand apart? Think like an agency or a marketing team. It’s really, really hard to market a show about someone who kills puppies with hammers unless you’ve got Will Smith starring, and even then, it’s risky. What makes your fruit shinier than the others?
One Sentence Description: If you can’t describe it in one sentence, it’s probably too complicated. “A boy goes back in time to save his friend.” Good. “A boy goes back in time to save his friend because his friend just invented a time machine but then gets shot and so now the boy has to use the time machine to help his friend but it accidentally sends him further back than he intended and he has to figure out a way to return. It’s really really good, please watch it.” Bad.
THE OUTLINE
My brother and I tend to structure a season like we’d structure a film script — into three acts. In fact, the three act structure can and should be applied to everything: a scene, an act (three acts in an act, baby!), a full episode, a full season.
Using Break a Leg as an example, we originally intended it to be 22 episodes (hiiigh hopes, we had, hiiiigh hopes). Episodes 1-7 were going to be Act I: where David Penn attempts to make his show despite a thousand setbacks. Episodes 8-16 were going to be Act II: David Penn making his sitcom and dealing with fame. Episodes 17-22 were Act III: The plot introduced in Episode 1 — with David Penn going to die — is brought back, with the last few episodes dealing with all the things related to his death.
We never did Act II and III — but Act I is basically Break a Leg, Season 1.
Aside from structuring your season, get to know your characters. Write out a description of your leads, figure out where their lives start in Episode 1 and where they end up in the finale. Remember, every character (like every episode and every season) should have an arc. They should not be the same from Point A to Point B unless they’re boring or their stagnation is on purpose.
THE SCRIPT
I’ll try to keep this short.
A three-act structure works like this:
The Central Question: You have a central question that asks a yes or no answer — this is the entire idea of your show/screenplay/whatever. Will the boy be able to come back from the past (Back to the Future)? Will Will Smith & Co. stop the alien invasion (Independence Day)? Will sporty Asian people successfully drift (Fast and Furious: Tokyo Drift)?
The central question is key to your script. Everything in your script should be about solving that question, or leading us closer to the answer. It’s what your show/film is about and it should be something you should always keep in mind as you write.
The Beginning: In a screenplay, it’s the first 10-pages. In a 30-minute show, it’s the first 3-5, in a 5 minute webshow? I don’t know. The first 30 seconds. The beginning of a script needs to do a few things: set-up the world, introduce the characters and immediately hook us into the show. Often, the first frame of a film will be an iconic image, other times it’ll be starting right in the action. Whatever it is, your first frame is a little microcosm of your entire film.
Act I: In a film script, Act I is usually page 1-35 or 45 (depending on how long your screenplay is — brevity, however, is the soul of wit. So, you know. Be witty.) In a TV script, it varies (some TV scripts are only two-acts, some are three), in a web series.. I guess the first 2 pages? (If you think about it in percentages, Act I is 30%, Act II is 50%, Act III is 20%, as far as length goes).
Act I has to set up your characters, set up your world further, set up the scenario and end with a turning point.
Act I Turning Point: The Act I turning point happens at the end of Act I and does a few things: reiterates the problem in the central question, changes the action in a different direction, raises the stakes for the character.
Act II: Now that Act I is over and has raised your delicious stakes, Act II is the journey. It’s the development of the main problem, it’s the journey to Mordor, the getting back to the future, the main part of your story. This is also why it’s the longest act.
Act II ends with…
Act II Turning Point: The Act II turning point usually comes in two beats. First, the complete failure of your heroes quest. It’s the moment when all seems lost until… until… the second beat. The last ditch effort. Maybe this will work… It also does the same thing as the Act I turning point — raises the stakes, reminds us of the central question, changes the action into a different direction and sends us flying into Act III.
Act III: The big showdown. The climax. Our heroes going to Mordor and then fighting off the evil flaming eye to finally throw the ring into the lava pit (oh why, oh why didn’t the giant bird just fly them there in the beginning?!) The third act is big, it’s punchy and it’s where you can easily win or lose your audience.
Conclusion: Unless you’re writing Lord of the Rings or AI, you only have one conclusion — the last few pages. Where you tie it all together and leave your characters either happy, sad, or dead.
And that — in a longer blog post — is how you write a script.
Feel free to ask me any questions about this. I was a screenplay reader for 2 years and this was generally my job. If I amass a few questions, I’ll write a blog post answering them, so, comment and ask away! And happy writing!Sunday, July 22, 2018
Sahib, Biwi aur Gangster 3, 27th July 2018
Sahib, Biwi aur Gangster 3, 27th July 2018
Directed by the famous B-town director Tigmanshu Dhulia, the movie is the third sequel of the Sahib Biwi and Gangster series of movies which were critically acclaimed throughout and proved to be greatest hits of their times. The film highlights superstars like Sanjay Dutt, Chitrangada Singh, Mahi Gill, Jimmy Shergill and Soha Ali Khan playing the lead roles. The release of the movie shall take place on 27th July 2018.
Checkout the Official Trailer of Sahib, Biwi aur Gangster 3 below:
Dhadak, Release Date: 20th July 2018
Dhadak, Release Date: 20th July 2018
Dhadak is an upcoming Bollywood romantic drama film which is directed by Shashank Khaitan. Dhadak features two new budding debutants, Ishaan Khatter and Janhvi Kapoor in lead roles. This movie is a remake of Marathi language film Sairat which was released in 2016. We're eagerly waiting to watch Dhadak in our nearest cinema halls.Shot in the colourful and culturally rich backdrop of Rajasthan, Dhadak is a passionate love story between two youngsters, Madhukar and Parthvi and narrates the beautiful and struggle full journey of falling in love at first site to ultimately being together. The movie is the hindi version of marathi superhit Sairat and is directed by Shashank Khaitan casting star kids Jhanvi Kapoor and Ishaan Khattar. The movie is all set to come on the silver screen on 20th July 2018.Soorma, 13th July 2018
Soorma, 13th July 2018
Soorma is an upcoming Bollywood movie in July 2018. It is a Hindi biographical sports drama based on the life of hockey player Sandeep Singh, directed by Shaad Ali and produced by Sony Pictures Networks India and C.S. Films. Diljit Dosanjh and Tapsee Pannu are seen in lead roles. The movie narrates the story of the international hockey player Sandeep Singh, played by Diljit Dosanjh, who was paralyzed after an accidental gunshot injured him in 2006. The movie is about the sheer determination of Sandeep who got back on his feet and made a comeback to international hockey in 2008.Yogita Bihani Wiki, Biography, Palak in Dil Hi Toh Hai, Personal Profile, HD Pics-Image
Bepannaah written update, April 18, 2018: Zoya slaps Aditya
Fans of Colors popular serial Bepannnah (Bepanah) will have to gear up for some interesting drama in the coming episodes!!
It would be seen that Zoya (Jennifer Winget) and Aditya (Harshad Chopda) will be in major mess as police arrests them and investigates about Yash and Pooja’s case. The cops doubts that Yash and Pooja didn’t meet with a fatal accident but it was a pre-planned murder and now they doubt Zoya and Aditya to be behind this accident.
Zoya cries out her pain as she refuses to kill Yash whom she loved so much. At the same time, Aditya tells the cops that that if he would have known about Pooja’s betrayal he would have killed her by his own hands.
At the same time, Arjun hides major truth about Yash and Pooja’s murder. He gets Pooja’s dairy which contains major truth which he is trying to hide from everyone.
Further, a major fight will happen between Aditya and Zoya after getting out of the custody since Arjun will help them with Bail plea. Aditya will once again try to overpower Zoya in his anger, but this time Zoya will revolt and will give a tight slap to Aditya. Zoya’s slap will leave Aditya in shock.
What will happen next? How will Zoya or Aditya find out about the truth in Pooja’s dairy? We will have to wait and watch!
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Zoya slaps aditya Bepanah SpoilerZoya Slaps Aditya – Bepanah Spoiler
As in the first episode of Bepanah Serial , Aditya and Zoya are in a shock when they find out about the death of their Partners . Both Zoya and Aditya see their Partners holding each other’s hands and Aditya turns Red in anger . He couldn’t believe that his wife could betray him …!!
As he leaves the spot where their dead bodies were lying along with the damaged car , Aditya Confronts Zoya . He says that Both their Husband and Wife were having Fun with Each other Behind their Back ..!! Zoya couldn’t Bear such harsh words and she Slaps Aditya . It came as an instant reflex out of Grief and Shock
Dil Hi Toh Hai Review: A Clichéd Love Story With Decent Performances
Sony’s Dil Hi Toh Hai brings an interesting family drama around two individuals Rithvik and Palak from different worlds. Rithvik belongs to a rich and influential Noon family, who is a modern day family known for their strong bonds, values and traditions. Vijaypath Noon is a caring father, who equally loves his three children. Rithvik is the eldest child and still he is much pampered by the family. He has no belief in love. He meets Palak, who is a doctor by profession and belongs to a middle-class respectable family. Rithvik hides a big pain behind his smile and casanova image. He lives happy with his family, and yet his eyes exhibit the heartbreak sorrow.
Main Characters:
Rithvik Noon:
He is a young, dashing, rich and charming guy. He is the heir of Noon family business. He likes to keep his goodness hidden and presents his bad image in front of everyone. Even then, everyone loves him a lot. He carries the bad boy persona with all the charm. He changes girlfriends every day. He adores his family. He flirts openly with many girls. He believes in not making any false promises. He hides his heartbreak, tears and pain to cover up his vulnerable side. He appears arrogant, ill-mannered and disrespectful at times. He becomes tough to understand for Palak.
Palak:
She is a sweet, simple, independent, bold, straight-forward girl. She represents the modern times girl who knows to hold her values, dignity and opinion. She likes to live her life on her terms. She is a self-respecting girl, who is content with whatever she has achieved in life. She is happy in her own world. She doesn’t have big dreams, but wants to fulfill the ambitions she has set. She doesn’t dream of getting any prince charming in her life. She values her family a lot. She always fights for the right. She is a helpful friend and a wonderful daughter. She is very committed towards her work.
Cast:
Karan Kundra as Rithvik Noon
Yogita Bihani as Dr. Palak Sharma
Asmita Sood as Shweta Sinha
Pooja Banerjee as Aarohi
Bijay Anand as Vijaypath Noon
Poonam Dhillon as Mamta Noon
Akshay Dogra as Rishabh Noon
Sudeepa Singh as Aditi Noon
Aman Chahal as Samar
Pooja S Jadhav as Shanaya Noon
Krishna shetty as Rohit
Abhinav Kapoor as Aman
Story So Far:
Palak is introduced in the first scene. She meets her friend Aarohi at her house. Aarohi tells Palak about Rithvik Noon, whom she madly loves. She tells Palak that he has refused to marry her since he is not ready to make a commitment. She worries for her pregnancy results. Palak gets disheartened knowing Aarohi’s sorrow. Aarohi does the pregnancy test and turns happy when the result comes negative. Aarohi meets Rithvik, who treats her badly and makes her understand that he is not interested in her anymore. He asks her to make a new beginning in life. He gets a new girlfriend of his type, which hurts Aarohi’s heart. Aarohi tells Palak that Rithvik broke up with her. Palak pacifies her.
Palak sees Rithvik and pities the girl who will fall in love with him. She hates men like Rithvik who doesn’t know how to respect women. She tells Aarohi that its good she got rid of a mean person like him. Rithvik realizes Aarohi wants to live with him, but he can’t commit to her. He breaks her heart intentionally so that Aarohi doesn’t get more serious about him. He doesn’t trust women and is afraid of commitments. He is sure that he will never fall in any trap like love. The story takes a two months leap. Palak sets her goals and makes a career in medical field. She is seen working in a hospital. She plans to get married after four years. She focusses on her career. She refuses to an alliance.
The news reaches Palak’s mother, who turns upset with Palak’s decision. Palak comes home and gets scolded by her mother. Palak tells her that she doesn’t want any rich and controlling husband. She soon learns that Aarohi went to Rithvik’s house for a talk. A party is going on in Rithvik’s house. He celebrates with his family. Palak tries to stop Aarohi. She learns more about Noon family. Rithvik’s happy and united family is shown. Rithvik’s parents Vijay and Mamta are the proud parents of three young children. Vijay has all hopes that Rithvik will take their biotech company to new heights. Rithvik asks Vijay to just retire and leave the business in his hands. He assures to do his best and keep their family pride.
Palak reaches there and looks for Aarohi. She meets Aarohi in the party. Aarohi tells her that Rithvik has no girlfriend currently and maybe she can try to convince him again. Palak asks her not to spoil her life and forget Rithvik. She convinces Aarohi and sends her to the car. Aarohi forgets the ID card and goes back to Rithvik’s room. She meets Rithvik in a way that she doesn’t see him, because of power failure occurring at the same instance. Rithvik gets mistaken about her and kisses her. Palak runs away from there and gets mad at Rithvik for snatching her first kiss’ special moment. She hates Rithvik even more.
Our Take:
Its again an old concept served with new packaging. The show totally lacks originality. Everything seems adapted from somewhere or the other. The characters of Rithvik and Palak’s family members are bit interesting. The show looked quite intriguing by the promo, but didn’t live up to the expectations. The characters aren’t too strong. There have been such similar characters in many shows before. Few special elements have an appeal, such as the story pace, leads’ chemistry, execution and modern times approach. Karan Kundra plays Rithvik Noon in the best way possible. His good looks work wonders for the character. Yogita Bihani is the fresh face in the show. She brings in simplicity as needed by the character. The supporting actors like Bijay Anand and Poonam Dhillon are cast aptly.
Dil Hi Toh Hai draws curiosity by the angle of Rithvik’s past. His past will be opening up slowly and reveal that he isn’t a bad guy, he also has a heart, a broken one. Rithvik’s past incident has completed changed him. Rithvik’s bonding with his family is something adorable to watch. Palak’s character of an ambitious and righteous girl could be sketched better. The sets are lavish and visually pleasing. The costumes and looks would set a new trend. Palak’s journey to struggle and win over odds will be seen. The show has a fair quotient of drama, romance and balanced portrayals. It brought a kissing scene in the first episode itself, and sets a benchmark for more episodes to come. Coming to dialogues, its well written and seem more realistic. Viewers may connect with Palak’s character more.
Overall:
The show brings two bold characters who prove that love eventually happens between opposites. The story is quite predictable. One may watch the show just for the leads and their wonderful chemistry.
BEAST IS MINE..! – TWINJ FF – CHAPTER#29-LAST CHAPTER
BEAST IS MINE..! – TWINJ FF –
CHAPTER#29 – THE FINAL DECISION
Recap-Marriage.. Consummation… Truth.. Shattered.. Twinkle left
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~ 2 WEEKS LATER ~
“Mumma..” Saani pulled out her lower lip.”Mumma.. Dont cry pleashh..” She held her mother’s arms.”Mumma.. Please dont cry..” her eyes welled up.”Mumma i am sholly.. If i did anything with wrong.. Pinky plomish i will be a good girl.”
Twinkle turned away from her daughter and wiped her eyes. It had been 2 weeks and still her heart ached.. Her heart craved.. She cried.”Shh…i am not crying.”
“Mumma.. Juth bolna paap hai…”Sani muttered and jumped on her mother’s lap.
“aur nadi kinaara saaf hai.” Twinkle replied forcing a giggle out.”Done with your homework.?” She asked.
“Yes..”She nodded.” Mumma i am hungry.. ”
“Okay.. I’ll make you something.” She smiled holding her in her arms, she stood up.
Twinkle made her, her favourite aaloo paratha and later tucked her to bed.
She carresed her daughter’s face not getting any sleep. Her mind diverted back to everything again.
The boring and hectic life… Twinkle arrogant taneja… Caring yuvi.. The flip.. His entry.. The first kiss in the dark… New client… Attractions…. Distractions… Starts Caring for her daughter… Yuvi’s strange behaviour.. His proposal.. Her rejection.. His post sweet behavior.. Best father.. Missing.. Back… Accident.. Sani’s injury.. Vulnerable twinkle.. Yuvi’s sudden death… Depressed.. Retracked… Jovial twinkle waking up…. Time flied.. Sani’s depression worsening.. London.. New feelings.. Foreign happiness…. Her love.. Kunj… Kisss… Denial… Stubborn lover… Denial… Love.. Denial.. Love… Confessions… India… Sister… Marriage.. Kisses… Hickeys.. Intimacy… Intentions.. The truth.. His tears.. His pleads.. Her cries.. Worst life…. Farmhouse.. Morning-Cries.. Evening – Cries.. Night- Cries.. Insomniac.. His regular calls.. Texts.. Pleadings.. Love..
Twinkle pulled her hands away and stood up to the window…
His words kept haunting her day and night..
‘TWINKLE PLS LISTEN TO ME.’
‘Twinkle.. No dont go..’
‘Twinkle.. I love you..’
‘Its not the whole truth.’
‘Twinkle listen to me..’
‘Twinkle please.’
‘Twinkle listen..’
‘Dont leave me..’
‘I love you.. I love you.. I love you Twinkle.’
‘please listen.’
‘TWINKLE!!’
Her tears welled up again. She was fed up of crying.. She was tired. She wanted to jump off the clifd and end her life but she didn’t wanted her daughter to face worst after her mother’s death. The little girl lost her father at a very tender age and she didn’t wanted her tk face the wrath she faced after her parents death. She didnt wanted her daughter to get hurt.
‘Angel…’
Thats what her daughter called him. Angel. She called him angel and that man turned out to be the beast.
Though she called him beast playfully. She never knew he would be doing such cheap acts. She closed her eyes feeling those feathery touches… His lips on her.. His body pressed against her.. His manhood inside her.. The pleasure.. The pain.. The love.. The passion..
‘HE TRIED TO MOLEST YOU’
Her words rang in her ears.
‘KUNJ.. IS THIS TRUE.’
‘Twinkle.. But listen—‘
She wrapped her hands around her body. Her anger retreating back. She felt worst.. She felt so furious.. Sbe felt everything on herself.. WHY DID SHE LOVED HIM.?
Yuvi was more better than him. He was caring. He was soft.. He was everything that anyone would desire for than WHY NOT HIM?
Why did she loved him.?
Why did she loved just him to break her heart.?
Her heart was torned into pieces.. Along with everything he broke her trust..
‘Twinkle please you need to listen to me.. Please.. Twinkle.. Dont go.. Listen to me.. Twinkle..’
His words… Did he needed one chance.?
She asked herself. She never let him justify himself.
After the whole two weeks, she thought.. Did he needed a chance.?
‘ NO.. HE BETRAYED HER’ Her mind retorted back immediately.
She looked at the dark sky begging answers to her unknown questions when her eyes descended and met his dark ones.
Her lips quivered and the tears which dried away again split..”Kunj…”She mumbled. He looked at her painfully. She knew that he knew that she lived here. It was his daily routine. He came there daily. He daily stood out of the gate looking at her helplessly while she pushed the window closed and left but today..
Today her heart stinged..
The tears that escaped her eyes matched his.. She looked bewildered at him whose eyes leaked.
Was he really crying.?
Did he missed her.?
Did he really loved her.?
Was he feeling bad.?
Did his heart ached as well.?
All those questions flooded in her mind. Twinkle turned away shaking her head. She was about to close the window when the clouds thudded loudly in the sky. She looked up and then at kunj. He just stood there unknown of the surrounding.
His eyes just kept looking at her as if taking in her appearance. As if he could live his whole life just looking at her. As if she was her oxygen.
Without waiting for anything twinkle slammed the window closed again as usual.
Kunj knew that he could to go in and talk to her but he didn’t want anything from her until she wanted to. He knew what his act had caused her but he also knew he couldn’t live without her. He loved her so much.
His unshaven stubbles told its own stories. The dark bags hung under his eyes indicating his lack of sleep from the couple of weeks.
He was torned.
She was hurt.
Both craved eachother,
Just one wall away..
But still too far.
She cried daily,
He cried as well.
Then why was it so complicated.?
The rain droplet touched his face one my one… But he didn’t budge. The clouds thudded freaking twinkle out inside the house while it poured out violently.
Twinkle fought an urge to look out and see if he was fine and safe. But a voice in her head retorted saying why would he stay there.
She never knew when her feet limped towards the window. She peeked out unwillingly. She looked at the scene wide eyed. There he stood out in the rain, dripping wet.
Twinkle rushed down the stairs in hurry and exited the house,”What the hell are you doing here…” She narrowed her eyes. He smiled.”Kunj..have you gone nuts.? Go..” She pointed towards the dark road.
He shook his head.”Are you okay.?” He asked.
She snickered.”As if you care..” She blurted out.”Kunj..go away.. You will get cold..”
“Why would you care.?”
“Right.”She mumbled and took a step back.”Why do i care.? I shouldn’t. I seriously shouldn’t. This is ridi—”
She was suddenly jerked with his arms around her.”Twinkle…twinkle..twinkle..”His voice croaked and she knew he fought his tears back.
“Kunj leave me.. ” She tried to push him.
“I am so sorry twinkle.. I seriously am sorry. I love you so much..please listen to me..” He begged holding her arms.
“Kunj leave me.”
“Twinkle.. Please listen to me once…”
“You have done enough.. You have hurted me enough Now leave.”
“Twinkle… You are hurting us both by pushing me away.”He trailed off but she jerked him away
“I SAID LEAVE ME.” She yelled.”Stand here whole night. But remember.. This wont affect me.. I dont care… Die..” She cursed running away.
The door closed behind her and she leaned onto it. crying another night, she closed her eyes while it rained outside vigorously.
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“Twinkle i love you.. Twinkle dont do this.. Listen to me.. Please.. Twinkle.. I love you..” His voice rang again and again in her ear and twinkle woke up in a jerk.
She looked at the wall clock. 4:29 Am.
The scattering voice of rain still buzzed in her head. Twinkle stood up and open the door. The sight infront of her knocked the air out of her.
“KUNJ..” She yelled running to his lifeless body, his eyes closed and forehead creased.”Kunj..what happened.. Open your eyes..” She patted his cheek. She checked his pulse but couldn’t hear anything.”KUNJ..no..”She mumbled..
Limping and dropping and shivering, she got him inside. She put him on the couch.”Kunj..open your eyes…” She massaged his palms.”Kunj…”
Suddenly something fell off his left palm. She squeezed the paper out and opened it.
‘
I know twinkle you hate me. You hate me for my act. But what about your heart.. What about mine. We love eachother then why this distance.
Twinkle trust me i didn’t intended anything. Trust me.. I know you dont want to hear my voice but please dont tear the paper. I know.. Whenever you get this chit.. I would not be there to tell.
I know you dont remember but twinkle we met years ago.. I met that bubbly twinkle taneja. Usha maa was my mother. Yes twinkle.. I know you won understand. My mother died. I was shattered. Thats when it all started, mahi. Mahi gave a shoulder to cry on. She helped me to gain back my original self. Come out of depression. She was the one who brain poisoned me for you.
I know you love your sister but twinkle she hates you.. She hates you to the core. She never died in that crash coz she was in another flight. She brain poisoned me about you killing my mother.. She did that. I was so furious and revengeful. Trust me twinkle my feelings arr raw and true for you.. I know i did wrong but.. I fell for you.. I feel for the sweet and innocent you. You melted my anger.. I was going to tell you everything but you never gave me a chance. Twinkle.. I know you are hurt but one thing i wanted to tell you.
YOU SHOULD HAVE GAVE ME A CHANCE.
I love you ❤ ‘
Tears gushed one by one and she fell weak. Everything joined. Every puzzle sat.
“Kunj omg.. Kunj.. PLEASE YOU CANT LEAVE ME.. kunj.. I am so sorry.. Kunj..”
One thing screamed in that pinned drop silenced room.
‘TOO LATE’.
Twinkle closed her eyes and then tried a final and only step.
She neared her mouth to his and pump in her breathe.”I only love you.” She muttered and gave him mouth to mouth.
Suddenly she was pulled out by the deep cough.”Kunj..”She said delighted.
“Tw–” She shook her head and stopped him.” I should leave— I dont belong here..”
“you belong here.. This BEAST IS MINE. I am so sorry kunj.”She hugged him tightly.”I love you.”
“I am sorry twinkle….” He sat up holding his ears.”I rea—”
“Kunj… I was the mad one.”
“But i am really sorry.. You donno how much—-”
“Forget the past.. I love you. You love me.. Thats all matters.”
“Trust.” He mumbled.”Trust is what matters the most.”
“I trust you.”
“I trust you too.” He said and claimed her lips.
THE END
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Trust me, this was not how i wanted the last part but nevertheless he it is..
Here the journey of BEAST IS MINE ENDED.
I love you all. Thanx for all your support.
ItsBepannaah 18th July 2018 Written Episode Update: Aditya Gives The Contract Of His Parents’ Anniversary To Zoya
Bepannaah 19th July 2018 Written Episode Update: Aditya And Zoya’s Ice Cream Date
Saturday, July 21, 2018
Bepannah Aashqui FF Eight Epi
Adiya OS : Lag Ja Gale
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After Harsh and Anjana’s 35th anniversary party, Zoya is going home. Outside the hooda mansion(back side road), zoya sees a person waiting with luggage by his side. She wondered ‘who’s the man, waiting outside the hooda mansion on the backside with luggage all alone and at this time. I should go and look’
Then she slowly walks towards the person, zoya thinks ‘I hope that he is not Aditya, god please he shouldn’t be aditya’
when zoya is a few steps behind that man, she hears that man saying “oh god when will my cab come”
zoya talks to herself and says in a low voice ‘oh god, its Aditya’s voice that means adi is again running away. I have to stop him, i cant just let him go again’
zoya walks a few steps and taps on adi’s shoulder. Adi gets shocked and he jumps. he turns behind and sees zoya standing in front of him.
He hesitantly says “zoya”
zoya says “Adi, what are you doing, why are you running away again”
he says “I cant tell you zoya, atleast not now”
zoya says “but why”
adi says “I just cant”
zoya says “fine then you are not going anywhere either”
zoya grabs adi’s hand and tries to pulls him, to take him back inside.
Adi doesn’t move and says “zoya”
zoya says “adi lets go na”
adi says “zoya”
zoya says “adi stop behaving like a kid”
adi says “zoya leave my hand”
zoya says “no until I take you back in”
adi’s anger is increasing, and because of this he jerks her hand.
zoya says “whats this new drama adi, what happened”
adi says “that should be my question”
zoya says “adi whats the matter”
adi says “its nothing now let me go”
zoya says “no I cant, but why do you wanna go leaving everyone here. adi please stay back, for your mom and dad, or atleast for arjun, please don’t go”
adi says “zoya just stop”
zoya says “adi for me and arjun, please”
adi says “I stayed with you and arjun for a week, isn’t that enough? I stayed this long for you two, you should be grateful to me and stop bugging me”
zoya gets angry and says “adi what happened, why are you behaving like this”
adi shouts “you happened, why are you behaving like a kid, why cant you understand that I am not going back there. whats your problem why cant you understand this simple thing . and why the hell are you after me, why cant you just leave me alone. yeah now I understand why yash left you, because you would have irritated him to hell like you are doing it to me”
zoya gets stunned at adi’s confession, she gets so startled and hurt that her eyes starts to get teary.
Seeing zoya this shattered, Adi curses himself in low voice and he moves his hand over his hair in frustration and mutters “I shouldn’t have bursted on her like this”
Adi says “Zoya “
zoya slowly takes step back and she wipes her tears.
adi takes step forward and says “zoya listen”
zoya turns and walks. adi goes in her direction, he pull her and turns her. while doing this zoya crashes into adi. zoya looks at adi.
he cups her face and says “zoya I am really very sorry, I shouldn’t have said that but I was so stressed that I bursted on you and said what I shouldn’t have. I am sorry please forgive me, I will go anything to makeup my mistake”
zoya holds his hands and asks “anything”
adi says “yeah anything”
zoya says “then don’t go”
adi takes a step back and looks at the ground.
zoya starts to break, she says “adi, you even promised me, day before yesterday, don’t you remember”
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in Adi’s room
adi is sitting on his bed with his laptop and doing some work.
zoya comes and knocks on the door.
adi sees zoya and says “come and sit” and he pats on the bed. adi puts his laptop aside and says “so what brings miss zoya here”
zoya says “only a day is left for the party and there is so much to do. I am stressed out so I want your honest opinion” adi nods. zoya continues ” I wanted to ask you about ” and her focus shifts to adi’s laptop and she sees that adi is buying some airline tickets.
zoya says “leave me, tell me what are you doing, are you planning to run away”
adi stays quiet.
zoya says “adi say something”
adi says “yes I am”
zoya gets shocked and says “what? adi how could you, you just came back after disappearing for six months and now you are leaving again”
adi looks at zoya seriously and then he starts to laugh.
adi says “you should have seen your face, your expressions were priceless”
zoya understands that adi has pranked her, so she grabs a pillow and starts to hi adi with it. adi tries to save himself.
he says “I was just kidding zoya, I was booking tickets for ma and pa”
zoya says “but you scared me so bad, you deserve punishment”
zoya countinues to hit adi for a couple of mintues then adi says “please please I am sorry, forgive me na”
zoya says “okay fine, but on a condition”
adi says ” what condition”
zoya says “that you will not run away again”
zoya moves her hand forward and says “promise?”
adi keeps looking at zoya’s hand, zoya snaps her fingers in front of adi and says “where are you lost? “
adi says “no where, no , actually I was wondering how will I be alive if I wont run away from you miss witch”
zoya says “you” and she hits adi with pillow. adi laughs and says “sorry, just kidding”
zoya moves her hand forward and says “promise?”
adi puts his hand in zoya’s hand and says “promise” meanwhile his other hand’s fingers are crossed.
adi thinks ‘ I am sorry zoya I had to lie to you, I have to go but if I will tell you then you wont let me go’
zoya thinks ‘now everything will be perfect’
zoya says “but what if you say I will go then what will I do”
adi says “then sing for me, I will stop and would not leave you”
zoya says “sing and me, no way, I cant sing”
adi says “your choice” , adi gets up from the bed, but zoya hold his hand and says “wont you tell me which song”
adi smiles and says “any song you think is appropriate for that time”
zoya smiles and says “okay got it”
adi nods.
zoya says “now come and see the preparations”
adi says “okay maam”
zoya laughs and then adi laughs.
adi and zoya goes downstairs to see everything
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adi says “my fingers were crossed, so I didn’t make any promise, I am sorry zoya”
zoya says “adi, how could you”
and she starts to cry.
adi says “please don’t cry zoya, look I am not going forever, I will come back”
zoya says “when”
adi says “soon”
zoya says “but where are you going”
adi says “I cant tell you that”
zoya says “please Aditya, please don go. if not for anyone, but for me please”
adi wipes her tears and says “no zoya, I cant stay, I have to go”
zoya says “adi please try to understand”
adi says “zoya that’s what I have been saying, please try and understand I have to go, its important and I promise I will come soon”
zoya says “adi, please stay, not for longer, but for few months, then you may go”
adi says “zoya, I have to go now, if I could then I would have stayed”
zoya says “atleast for sometime, a month , no, a week would work too. “
adi says “zoya, calm down “
zoya cries more and hugs adi, “please for a day, just a day and I wont ask you for anything else ever, please just for a day or even for few hours. please stay”
adi says “zoya, Its very very important and I cant delay, if I delay my flight and stay, then everything will be destroyed. I have to go. but I will come back soon I promise.”
the road gets brighter, as a cab comes there and stops.
adi says “now I have to go zoya, my cab has come”
adi breaks the hug and says “take care zoya”
and adi walks to the car and gives the driver his luggage.
zoya sings while she is crying
” Lag Ja Gale Ke Phir
ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho
shayad Phir Is Janam Mein
mulakat Ho Na Ho”
Adi stops, an listens to zoya, he turns around and sees zoya crying and her arms open for a hug. adi goes to zoya and hugs her tightly. zoya hugs adi tightly too.
their hug went on for a minute or so, both are crying.
[ in Background the song plays :
Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir
ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho
shayad Phir Is Janam Mein
mulakat Ho Na Ho
lag Jaa Gale a a aahh hhh hhh]
they breaks their hug and gets lost in each other’s eyes.
[ in Background the song plays :
hum Ko Mili Hai Aaj
ye Ghadiya Naseeb Se
je Bhar Ke Dekh Leejiye
hamako Kareeb Se
phir Apke Naseeb Mein
ye Baat Ho Na Ho
shayad phir Is Janaam Mein
mulakaat Ho Na Ho ]
adi cups zoya’s face and kisses her on the forehead, he says “I will be back soon, wait for me”
zoya doesn’t give any reaction to adi, rather she is just looking in his eyes. Adi slowly takes his steps back, then he turns to go.
zoya looks at adi, then she goes after him. she turns him by pulling his jacket and she lightly presses her lips onto his, adi gets startled for a moment. A moment later, it strikes to him that zoya has kissed him. then he cups her face and they both share a passionate kiss.
they break their kiss, after a minute or less. they catches their breathe, adi touches his forehead with her forehead.
zoya says “I love you adi”
adi says “I love you too zoya”
zoya looks in adi’s eyes, and says “please come back soon”
adi says “I will”
after a minute, adi says “I have to do now, bye”
zoya says “bye adi”
then adi hugs zoya and goes to the cab.
zoya waves adi bye, adi too waves at zoya.
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adi is sitting in cab, and he wonders ‘ why am I feeling bad, why am I getting the feeling that I am doing something wrong. but why? I am feeling so messed up. but I will come back soon so I should stop bothering myself .’
[ in Background the song plays :
Do pal ruka khwaabon
Ka kaarvaan
Aur phir chal diye tum
Kahaan ham kahaan ]
adi after sometime reaches airport, and he still is feeling weird, like something is not happening right, and many more such feelings but he doesn’t pay any attention to it and goes inside the airport.
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meanwhile zoya takes a cab to go home. when she is in the cab, she wonders ‘I couldn’t stop Aditya from leaving me. I couldn’t. I don’t know if I could ever meet Aditya.’
[ in Background the song plays :
Do pal ki thi ye dilon
Ki daastaan
Aur phir chal diye
Tum kahaan ham kahaan
]
and she reaches home after some time, but the thought that she will never be able to meet Aditya is eating her.
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[ in Background the song plays :
Aur phir chal diye
Tum kahaan ham kahaan
]
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By....DeepBepannaah 20th July 2018 Written Episode Update Aditya saves Zoya
Bepannaah 20th July 2018 Written Episode, Written Update on bepannaahUpdates.com
Arjun and Aditya make Harsh and Anjana to pose for photographs. Arjun says everyone’s heart will fail today. Aditya reminds him that she is their mother. she looks really happy today. Arjun suggests him not to tell the truth about Zosh events. Aditya says we must do it. Reporters questions Huda’s on celebrating Aditya’s return. Arjun says it will happen. You will remember it for years. Aditya adds that the one who spread the rumour will organize the event. Reporter remarks that this is why people call Huda’s different. He asks for a family photo. Aditya and Arjun high five as they all pose for the photo.
Anjana refuses to let it happen. Aditya tries to make her understand. She isn’t our enemy. She did all that to bring me home and Arjun was also involved in the plan. Anjana does not
mind sending her a thank you note with some flowers. I cannot bear to see her in my house for the next 7 days! Arjun says she will just focus on her work. She is the best event manager of Mumbai. I promise you. She will be the best. She refuses to have a party then. Let’s cancel it. Arjun and Aditya reason that they have already released it in the press. It would be a big issue if we cancel the party now. Aditya nods. Just let her do it. She will only come here to organise the event and nothing else. Arjun seconds Aditya. She isn’t coming in the house as an event manager. Aditya and Anjana glare at him. He tells them to focus on the main thing and not on the words. Aditya says you are ruining it. He convinces Anjana that Zoya is best. Noticing his mother’s stare, he covers up saying that Zosh is best. Do it for my sake. She gives in. Aditya and Arjun go to make preps. Harsh tells her it isn’t right to fight with their kids right now. There are other ways to make things go your way. She asks him about it. Harsh tells Anjana that Zoya will come in this home on her own but she will go as per Anjana’s wish. She tells him she cannot bear her at all. Something has gone wrong whenever she has stepped foot inside the house.
Zoya comes to Huda House with Akansha, Shawn and few other crew members. Akansha is impressed with the location. Aditya welcomes her. She shares that she always comes on time. We have come to just check out the venue. Shall I talk to aunty if there is any doubt in her mind? He denies. She starts her work. Aditya thinks of Anjana’s words. Good idea.
Zoya and her team speak of the setup. Harsh comes downstairs and notices Zoya. You came here because of Adi but I wont let you do this event. Zoya asks the servant about electricity room. He tells her. She goes to check it herself.
A hoodie man cuts one of the cable and leaves it hanging. Zoya is headed towards the room and is about to touch the handle. The current is passing through it. Upstairs, Shawn and Akansha are arguing about something when Anjana scolds them. How dare you take measurements without consulting me? This is my house and my party. You wont do anything without asking me! Harsh takes her with him. She asks him why he looks pale. He just says downstairs and takes her with him.
Zoya’s phone rings. Akansha tells her that Anjana was very angry. I cannot handle her. Please take care of her. Zoya agrees to come in 2 minutes. Zoya extends her hand towards the handle when Aditya pushes her away. He gets shock and falls on top of her. She realises that his back is burnt. Anjana and Harsh panic seeing Aditya’s state. Anjana looks at the loose cable. This was bound to happen as this inauspicious girl is here! Anjana and Harsh take Aditya. Zoya is still shaken.
Wasim and his wife come to Zosh. His wife suggests speaking at reception first but he wants to see his daughter’s office. I feel proud to see what my daughter has made. She reminds him that it is their daughter. He smiles. It was a slip of tongue. She understands that he is happy to see their daughter settled in life. He is happy at Zoya’s progress. I hope she makes us proud like this always. A staff member greets them. They ask for Zoya. She shares that Zoya is in Huda House. Wasim and his wife are taken aback to know that Zoya is organizing Anjana and Harsh’s anniversary party. Wasim walks out of the office angrily. His wife tells the girl to call and inform Zoya right away.
Anjana taunts Zoya for interfering with electrical wires of home. Do event managers have electrical degree? She does not let Zoya say anything. She only wants fireworks like last time in Eid Party. Zoya says I only told where the bomb was and that’s how everyone was safe. I just went to check if the generator will be able to take the load. Sparks were there already. Aditya reached on the right time. Anjana remarks that this is what Aditya has to do now. She asks Victor to bring ice pack. She tells Aditya not to act like some super hero. I don’t want my sons to be in problem because of outsiders. Some people are inauspicious. Wherever they go, they bring sadness. Zoya again insists that she too could have been hurt. The wire was loose already. Anjana argues with her. Aditya says it is going overboard. Anjana says is Zoya not saying too much. He tells her not to make a mountain out of the mole. ZOya dint know about the spark. I went downstairs and saw the sparks. Nothing else was going on. What would have people thought if people had known that someone got electrocuted in our house? We would have to cancel the party then! Shout as much as you guys want. He heads to his room. Zoya looks at his wound as he goes inside.
Precap: Zoya makes Aditya remove his shirt and nurses his wound. He looks at her in the mirror. Title song plays in the background. Zoya notices him looking at her.
